Jig-saw Friends

Jig-saw Friends

A Poem by Kajal Gulabani



'Tis so far from our reach,
That tinkle which shines on an ether,
"Catch me if you can", it beseech,
 Sigh! Just a few can win over. 

Think not twice on that, forsooth,
Pals are rooted in the burrow of soils,
Love stirs up cosmic bells, is truth,
But,
Amity showers where string of faith coils.

Whilst lack of care paves a feign path,
Heavens! If only thou bless me a bull's eye,
Soar then, with you above the layer of wrath,
Here I flock with my 'feather- birds', so high !

Sulk not over your marred life's jig - saw, 
Sure will you find your lost cards,
Pick them up without an inch of flaw,
Wonder ! They complete the charades.

Need no starry cluster to outshine the heart,
Amongst all, it's the 'North Star' that stands apart. 
So do I call them 'jig-saw' friends,
True friendships thus join hands. 

© 2013 Kajal Gulabani


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very catchy Title.. and interesting poem as well ^-^

Posted 7 Years Ago


I am just a sucker for old English and therefor enjoyed your poem very much so. The message behind it is beautiful and the structure looks well though out. Amazing write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


people; that creature which cant understand even themselves. it is really strange that people lived on earth maybe for millions of years and they still cant understand each other..

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Yes people are a bit of a puzzle and figuring them out so they fit in can be a learning experience, finding a corner piece is always a real gem and to be held onto

Posted 7 Years Ago


Hmmm intriguing read, is this about friends that are out of reach but still shine in your life, seems as though you were speaking to me? Holding your hand, either way, I love it.... ;-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Kajal Gulabani

7 Years Ago

Hey Frieda.. That's suhweeettt!! Yes, it's about friends who are rare to find. Just like a jig saw p.. read more
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Always my pleasure.
An eloquent and interesting piece

Posted 7 Years Ago


Kajal Gulabani

7 Years Ago

Thanks John :)
to start off with it confused me but once i got on to the second verse i under stood and i really enjoyed it espeashaly about the northen star the brightest star in the universe i think thats pritty cool thankyou

Posted 7 Years Ago


Kajal Gulabani

7 Years Ago

Thank you.
"Love stirs up cosmic bells, is truth,
But,
Amity showers where string of faith coils. "
I like the use of the language. Made the poem come alive and I wanted t understand the thoughts in the poem. I like the flow of the poem to the very strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Kajal Gulabani

7 Years Ago

Thank yous :)

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Kajal Gulabani
Kajal Gulabani

Ahmedabad, Shilaj, India



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