Jig-saw Friends

'Tis so far from our reach,
That tinkle which shines on an ether,
"Catch me if you can", it beseech,
 Sigh! Just a few can win over. 

Think not twice on that, forsooth,
Pals are rooted in the burrow of soils,
Love stirs up cosmic bells, is truth,
But,
Amity showers where string of faith coils.

Whilst lack of care paves a feign path,
Heavens! If only thou bless me a bull's eye,
Soar then, with you above the layer of wrath,
Here I flock with my 'feather- birds', so high !

Sulk not over your marred life's jig - saw, 
Sure will you find your lost cards,
Pick them up without an inch of flaw,
Wonder ! They complete the charades.

Need no starry cluster to outshine the heart,
Amongst all, it's the 'North Star' that stands apart. 
So do I call them 'jig-saw' friends,
True friendships thus join hands. 

Reviews

[smilempsn]

very catchy Title.. and interesting poem as well ^-^

[Jem Sagcal]

I am just a sucker for old English and therefor enjoyed your poem very much so. The message behind it is beautiful and the structure looks well though out. Amazing write!

[khalid]

people; that creature which cant understand even themselves. it is really strange that people lived on earth maybe for millions of years and they still cant understand each other..

[BL]

Yes people are a bit of a puzzle and figuring them out so they fit in can be a learning experience, finding a corner piece is always a real gem and to be held onto

[Frieda P]

Hmmm intriguing read, is this about friends that are out of reach but still shine in your life, seems as though you were speaking to me? Holding your hand, either way, I love it.... ;-)

[Kajal Gulabani]

Hey Frieda.. That's suhweeettt!! Yes, it's about friends who are rare to find. Just like a jig saw puzzle, they complete the puzzle of our lives. It's just that we need to have that bull's eye to recognise that spark in their auras.

[Frieda P]

Always my pleasure.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

An eloquent and interesting piece

[Kajal Gulabani]

Thanks John :)

[ritchie carter]

to start off with it confused me but once i got on to the second verse i under stood and i really enjoyed it espeashaly about the northen star the brightest star in the universe i think thats pritty cool thankyou

[Kajal Gulabani]

Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

"Love stirs up cosmic bells, is truth,
But,
Amity showers where string of faith coils. "
I like the use of the language. Made the poem come alive and I wanted t understand the thoughts in the poem. I like the flow of the poem to the very strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Kajal Gulabani]

Thank yous :)