a request....

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

our journey with you

need a destination...

request from the paper boats !

 

........kaa.na.kalyanasundaram.

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and direct words. I like the beautiful photo. Allow the reader to feel peace for a moment. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Jade]

Simple and profound.

[外人 (Gaiji..]

So beautiful ! Great atmosphere and simplicity (the positive one, it's simple not banal !)

[Alpris]

This is mysterious. I enjoyed reading it :) still makes me think a lot

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokhar..]

Good one!

[Clockwork]

I love the photo and I like how you use the paper boats to set the journey. I think that is a great image to focus on. That really brings the reader into the poem and shows how even small things can make a journey. Well done!

[Tate Morgan]

reminds me of an old tradition of writing down a prayer and tying iot to a ballon then letting it fly where it may

[SUGATA M]

no words..am speechless

[AK]

Amazing poem! I loved the reference to paper boats! Reminds me of the days when I was young and used to make paper boats and see them floating on water. It reminds me that I can still find time to make them and become a small child once in a while... Thank you for the flashback and keep writing!

[Nidheesh Sankaran]

woooooooow!!!!