Laughed

Laughed

A Poem by Marisa Kathleen Lopez
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They never saw it coming.

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They laughed all day

Stressed and weary

They quit searching

© 2010 Marisa Kathleen Lopez


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Marisa Kathleen Lopez
I wrote a few for a scholarship, but I missed the deadline. This one is my favorite of them all. Tell me please if I messed up the style, I tried my very best. :) Comments and critiques welcomed.

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Perhaps I'm not smart enough to understand this one. Could you lend any insight? Were you trying to make a poem according to contest guidelines like, say, a Japanese haiku or something? I notice that there are 4 beats to each line. It's succint and leaves the reader what's happening. For example, who are these people? What is stressing them? They quit searching for what?
Wally

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Marisa Kathleen Lopez
Marisa Kathleen Lopez

El Paso, TX



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I love to write, read, dance, and make music. I'm feminist--to a degree--and independent. I love meeting new people and hearing new ideas and theories so feel free to share :) more..

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