stopping at 8

stopping at 8

 

AIDS:

a picture of a small boy

who did nothing wrong

 

Reviews

[Larissa G.]

Maybe it's just me, but...two lines? That's a statement. A powerful statement in this case, but a statement, with a title that doesn't quite fit with the rest of what's there.
Isn't there more to this? A story to be told with a beautiful flow and images and so on, the things that combine to make a beautiful poem?