Confession

‘I will hurt you’

 he confessed,

and like a sinner,

kissed my feet.

And yet,

all I felt

was blessed,

that he was

touching me.

Author's Note

Any reviews and comments really really appreciated as I am new here. Thank you!

Reviews

[Aaron the Baron]

I love this. Affection is so welcomed, even when pain can be seen coming around the turn. Welcome!

[Kat Waugh]

Thank you for your review, it means a lot to me that you liked it.

[Night]

Short, yet beautiful. Sometimes, we don't care as long as there is love. I loved this! Welcome to the cafe Kat, I hope you enjoy your time here!

[Kat Waugh]

Thank you for your review, I'm glad you liked it!

[Night]

You are more than welcome! :)

[zainul]

Very sweet feeling emerges from your short piece.
Welcome here,dear poet.:)

[Kat Waugh]

Thank you very much! :-)

[zainul]

You are most welcome,dear friend :-)

[Relic]

I see you've mixed the emotions of loneliness with a story from the bible. Some people are so hurt and empty inside, any emotions shown to them are welcome, even bad ones. Welcome to Writers cafe Kat, you're starting off well.

[Kat Waugh]

Thank you for your review, it means a lot to me.

[Relic]

You're welcome.