THE FALLEN ANGEL

She carries the weight of the darkest

clouds over her head;

she feigns joy, but

her heart bleeds red.

 

when i am hurting,

her presence washes away my sorrow;

she embraces me like the pleasant breeze,

but it is her heart that she won't

lend  for me to borrow.

 

when she's broke, she sings to

the lonely skies;

and the sadness evaporates

from those angel eyes.

 

She walks in defiance of malice,

and her elegance accentuates

the sparkle of her heart;

Courage welcomes her with open arms,

her perseverance and magnanimity

 shall forever keep her from falling apart.

 

Her voice has nested in my ears;

My memories of her remain immortal

in my thoughts.

She has fought fiercely against my

fears;

her presence shall stay forever,in the chambers

of my heart.

 

She is bravery in it's most endearing

disguise,

she holds on to her dreams

and let goes of her cries.

She is now ready to spread her wings,

and prepared to face any war life brings.

Reviews

[Riss Ryker]

Yes, I agree with Confuser. This was really amazing.

[Confuser]

Brilliant; so beautiful! Looked at age 16 thinking he must be a prodigy! Thank you. Wonderful.