Eclipse

The world awkening from its deep slumber.
A deep slumber succumbed by the dark of night.
Escping from the belly of the beast into a different land of eternl light. Breaching and twisting out of the mouth. Kicking nd flling onto the soft dewey grass.
Wrapped up in damp arms, hugging and pulling you into a morning that will never come...

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i fine this piece interesting...there is hope of the new day...awakening from the deep slumber yet at the same time, the damp arms pull us into a morning that will never come...

perhaps this is afterlife...

nicely penned...

leaves that open ended feeling that allows us to contemplate.

i like that.

jacob

[Traci]

Very nicely written Lee and open for interpretation, which is the true beauty of poetry. Job well done!

[Samantha Tamburello]

I like it! I feel like your particular choice of words were interesting and made me want to keep reading! :)
Awesome!

[Lee Rhodes]

Im glad you liked it :)

[zainul]

Wonderful work.

[Celtic]

wow, it's looks like a quote, very nice poem, liked your ink flow. You know what here your words've spread out some light in my mind...because it's so powerful write.
depth, feel, light, dig, slumber, kick, pain, grain...n so on there's so good words you've used & each one has got it's own diff. meanin' . It's an interestin' one.
well write, beautiful piece...
carry on with your such kinda nice stuffs.

[B-poet]

Very deep, eloquent, and revealing from within the depths of vivid imagery backed by powerful and profound diction used to promote a great theme. Great write. An intriguing read. :)