Beautiful Illusion
A Poem by krystle
Inspired by a man I was once in awe with
I didn't understand how such a beautiful human being that everyone loves, could have so much sadness
But I see it when he plays a song on his six strings
That his empty voids, are filled with meaningless kisses and his nights are lonely and long
© 2014 krystle
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Amazing use of words and thoughts. I like the complete poem. A life with empty void and fake kisses lead to lonely ending. A strong ending to the outstanding poetry.
Coyote
Posted 8 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
not sure how to reply to this but he sounds like a lovely man
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9 Years Ago
ahaha thank you! means a lot
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9 Years Ago
you are welcome.......:) :)
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9 Years Ago
Yes you are very right, and it's sad how un noticed those desperate souls go. though I wrote about h.. read moreYes you are very right, and it's sad how un noticed those desperate souls go. though I wrote about how I DID see it. Thank you for your comment :) you are very right
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9 Years Ago
I've written quite a bit about it myself. My poems, "Look Away, Look Away" and "A Soldier's Hell," a.. read moreI've written quite a bit about it myself. My poems, "Look Away, Look Away" and "A Soldier's Hell," are a look at the plight of our veterans; my poems, "Heaven's Comedian" and "Laugh Clown… Laugh… " are in honor of Robin Williams. "Monsters" and "Hates Me" and "Always and Always Alone" and "Blind Them To My Pain" are a few about my own feelings of loss and abandonment.
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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9 Years Ago
ah thank you!
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9 Years Ago
haha very weird, doesn't sound too pleasant to be the guy I described! here if you ever need some ea.. read morehaha very weird, doesn't sound too pleasant to be the guy I described! here if you ever need some ears. thank you :)
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9 Years Ago
Lol its evident in my writing I think. I'll take you up on that offer :)
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9 Years Ago
this comment has flattered me
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Added on September 24, 2014
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krystlecoconutcreek, FL
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This world excites me. I like being around people with genuine personalities and happy spirits. I'm made of coffee and love Jesus. now that the basics are out of the way, I'm also a walking contradic.. more..
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