Open My Eyes

Open My Eyes

A Poem by Kaylee Marlin

8/26/13 8:55 pm


Cloak my eyes with velvet silk,

And lead me to a wondrous place,

Where a sun is setting upon the clouds,

Fly me up into the sky,

And lay me down on a blushing cloud,

Where the wind unwraps my blindfold,

That keeps me from seeing beauty,

And as I gaze across the horizon,

The cloud that I lay on,

Slowly floats to the ground,

With my first steps I look around me,

And now beauty is all that I see.

© 2013 Kaylee Marlin

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Love the imagery in your poem Kaylee. You took me to another world, far away from the trouble and strife all around us. Beautifully penned. I enjoyed this so much. Write on!

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Added on August 27, 2013
Last Updated on August 27, 2013


Kaylee Marlin
Kaylee Marlin

lafayette, IN

I don't talk very much. I am a quiet person when I'm around people I don't know or don't like. There's very few people I feel comfortable talking to. I don't like my dad at all. My mom and I are on un.. more..