I Hate You

dedicated to my current struggle

 

 

I Hate You

 

hate is a strong word

or so they say

but who are they?

i hate you

for what you claimed to be

and i found to be untrue

i hate you

because you lack laughter and emotion

i want to share with you

but when i do you shut me out

or use what i share against me

i hate you

because you made me trust again

only to be reminded of why i don't

my mind screams "i told you so"

while my heart whispers "let it go"

i hate you

because i want you to leave

never come back

let me start again

to be the real me

and not this person

who hates

 

Reviews

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Painful. You give your heart and take a chance. You expressed this feeling so well, that thin line between love and hate.

because i want you to leave
never come back
let me start again
to be the real me
and not this person
who hates

there is so much pain in these lines, but hope is in the heart.

Very good writing.

[Peacegal]

Wow, this is too much like me sometimes, amazing expression!

[T]

I just came across this and LOVE IT. I can feel the emotion and reading it aloud gives it power. I know this pain and the risk of loving again is always hard.

[Charles D. Moorer]

We all have one of these relationships at one time in our lives. It passes and we grow stronger.

[Voltaire Mephisto (aka ..]

I feel there's a lot of emotion put into this. That's why I like it. Personally I would've added some stabbing and dying, but to each his own. lol

[Leran Vakem]

A very good piece this, I enjoyed reading this and letteing my mind travel the past.
It brought a tear to my eye, so much did I feel the emotions in this piece.
Good work, keep them coming
Leran Vakem

[Mysty Rayn]

A lot of emotion. Remind me not to get on your bad side. :)

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

i want to share with you

but when i do you shut me out

or use what i share against me

I hate when they do it, I am very open and on strugle it can come against me Yos

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

nice job kia. i loved that poem/rant it's good to get out our anger and emotions, esp through a healthy outlet such as poetry. i particularly like this line:

"because you made me trust again

only to be reminded of why i don't...."

(that's exactly how i have felt about men in my life. that's why i just keep in my shell, accomplish my goals, work hard, and i find it's easier that way...no drama, no obsession, depression, stress just me, myself, and i" hee hee)

kena

[Cassandra]

Great. Very similar to my poem "shock to the heart" about hate. It really consumes us.. this was a good account of it.