Ghost Ship

Ghost ship i see in the distance

Why dont you come save me?

My heart is no longer beating

I need off this long forgotten place

 

Ghost ship i see in the distance

Why dont you come save me?

My family is forever gone

I see you coming towards me

 

I step aboard and look around

Dancing and merriment is all around

I blink once and its all gone

All that is left is an old ghost ship

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Loneliness can certainly makes us feel out of sorts with the whole world... then we reach for things we think exist but are mirages to our hearts. I too enjoyed this.

[Crusaderscross]

This poem has substance. Really gloomy, almost desperate. Really really liked it.

[r]

Oooh. This is different and moody. i really like this :)

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I like this..it's difference and you create a moody feel..really enjoyed the atmospherics