Seek Me

You hope too see the answer within these eyes 

Given any chance you began to seek

The light of all dark turns 

Hope to find the answer within my touch 

Are the answers meant for you to find 

Carefully you begin to search within my soul

For a way to clear my mind 

My happiness blinds you 

Leaving those who search 

An open door 

Upon it we see 

A cracked opening 

For those whom are locked out 

Fall to there knees 

Yet all hope of regaining my sweet secret 

Oh what a scene 

Those who wait around 

Are in for a surprise 

Of the depths of my darkness 

No one is yet to climb the ladder 

To see my creations 

Within the darkness 

All hope sits on a limb

Oh wait and see my seekers

Just stay and wait 

For the adventure within 

 

Reviews

[Alexis]

Um, I believe that I am running out of ways to express my thoughts of your work. (: But know, that this is a good thing.

I sit here, doing the two thing I love most: reading/writing beautiful work and drinking strawberry milk.

Without your work, right now, my strawberry milk wouldn't be half as good(: I do mean that in a good way though.

Your work is such beauty, I love reading it. Please, keep sending me reading requests. (:

[Lover Of Words]

I am glad i can make your milk better lol

[Baban.A.A]

I surmise there is fate that befalls into someone, at first you feel like why me, but then you realize it was the perfect choice for you . I believe in that what you wish will wait the right, apropos time and place to become of you. Yes being patient is hard and bitter, but finally you will find the seeker who in different time or place seeked you. great poem well done.

Only true connected shall find eachother.... I belief in that concept.

"Hope to find the answer within my touch"

If you touch enough, people will answer, and if it's in silence or in daylight,
They will. I like your deep perception of the touch to your soul.

It has for me a meaning you're "totally real" and so am I.
We are connected by that... beautifully done, poetic miracle.

- Elisa

[melissa]

wonderful piece i loved it

[Art]

a most interesting point of view...nice work on this poetic expression of thought...

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You know what Kelsey?... I have been searching for years (looking for the key to true happiness)...to find what burns within...
could it be that the door was open all along?...
This is beautifully penned, my friend!~xoxo~ :)

[Lover Of Words]

Why thank you... Still unsure of where this one came from but its one of my best ones... Thanks for stopping by :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Isn't it wonderful when something magical comes pouring out, unexpectedly?... it comes from within, I can assure you of that... :)

[Lover Of Words]

Wow. What a review. Thank you for you kind words lovely one

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing poem my Poet friend. It is terrible we allow so few into our life. We create barriers and defense. I like the flow of thoughts leading to the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lover Of Words]

Thank you for the kind words

[Ohhhwillow]

Kelsey, is the you introspective, or are you speaking of a lover? A friend? A foe? I would like to know what led you to writing this piece

[Lover Of Words]

Willow it was from my prospective

[Ohhhwillow]

I gathered that, I was referring to the person you were referring to as "you".

[Lover Of Words]

Oh no not me someone else

[Ohhhwillow]

Who is that someone else?

[Lover Of Words]

the someone else would be an ex

[Sami Khalil]

"To see my creations

Within the darkness

All hope sits on a limb

Oh wait and see my seekers

Just stay and wait

For the adventure within "

You took us to the depth of darkness and within darkness...A splendid read and write...:)

[Lover Of Words]

Well thank you

[Sami Khalil]

Well. You are welcome...:)