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wounds of my past

wounds of my past

A Chapter by Pax
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hopeful fellow...

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The wounds of my past

lingering and wondering

through the days of my life

then you came along

and heal this dying soul

This magic coated masked melted like candles.

Your resonated flames made it into liquid nitrogen.

Making it unattainable

For me to grasp and hold into

It evaporated in the sun kissed skies.

My black salted tears evaporated

By your brightly warm glow.

I feel alive and free

The wounds faded into scars

Leaving a mark of lamented past

Reminding me that I’ve learned

I came back to this wondrous existence with you at my side

I bid farewell to the dying lands of grief

And promise not come back

As long as your light and wisdom shines on me

Never fading



© 2012 Pax


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Man you tear me wanting share these poems with a woman.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this. Really. Parang gusto ko sha sabihin to someone. Great work. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pax

7 Years Ago

aha! kabayan... di ko alam, your one of us...hehe.. now i know... thanks ng marami...
Carissa Marie

7 Years Ago

Hahaha. You're welcome po. :D
"I came back to this wondrous existence with you at my side
I bid farewell to the dying lands of grief
And promise not come back
As long as your light and wisdom shines on me
Never fading."

Haaay, Pax. I'm really inspired by this. Paganda ng paganda ang mga gawa mo. Kung sa akin, para itong yung "New Life" ko.
Tama yan. Go go go!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pax

7 Years Ago

wow... that's a great complement dear dhaye... thank you very much...
i feel like my words tod.. read more
Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

You showed your pic na ha? Para kang bata sa pic na yan. Kaso malungkot talaga.
Next time, yun.. read more
A very touching and beautiful poem, inspirational and hopeful. Love poems can be cheesy, sometimes so cheesy that it stinks. But this one was nowhere near cheesy, maybe it had that delliciousness of mozarella but lol sorry im hungry! Anyway a very beautiful poem...well done my friend:-):-):-D.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pax

7 Years Ago

lol... sorry to make you hungry... ;D
thank you my friend... I'm glad you find this piece tas.. read more
so inspirational and beautifully written

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pax

7 Years Ago

thank you my friend. I really appreciate your thoughts.
This is beautiful!, just beautiful!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pax

7 Years Ago

thanks you so much...I'm glad you like it...
Very beautiful once again man. I can't say enough about your poetry.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pax

7 Years Ago

thank you cole, always a pleasure to hear from you..
A really touching poem of yours :) It's really beautiful and I'm glad that the speaker finally has something or somebody to shed beautiful light to their dark world. The world is really so much easier to bear with friends at your side and you have made that acknowledged in your poem

Lovely write

Posted 7 Years Ago


Katherine Enma Pineapple

7 Years Ago

XD XD XD good luck XD I'll cheer you on!!! sorry I'm a sucker for such things :)) Any girl will be h.. read more
Pax

7 Years Ago

that's nice..hope she'd like it...but it's all in the past now...thanks
Katherine Enma Pineapple

7 Years Ago

you're welcome and really I'm pretty sure she'd like it
Excellent! Reminds me of the saying, "Every thundercloud has a silver lining" Or at least I believe that is how the quote goes. Hoping for a better tomorrow is always the best way to look at a bad situation, and your word choice is great.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pax

7 Years Ago

thanks, i never heard of that quote..seems very meaningful..just like the poem..
RachelReaper

7 Years Ago

I had always thought so:)
Hard to do. But must release the sadness.
"I feel alive and free
The wounds faded into scars"
When the wounds are just scars to remind us. We can move on if we are lucky. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Pax

7 Years Ago

thanks my friend...

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