wounds of my past

hopeful fellow...

The wounds of my past

lingering and wondering

through the days of my life

then you came along

and heal this dying soul

This magic coated masked melted like candles.

Your resonated flames made it into liquid nitrogen.

Making it unattainable

For me to grasp and hold into

It evaporated in the sun kissed skies.

My black salted tears evaporated

By your brightly warm glow.

I feel alive and free

The wounds faded into scars

Leaving a mark of lamented past

Reminding me that I’ve learned

I came back to this wondrous existence with you at my side

I bid farewell to the dying lands of grief

And promise not come back

As long as your light and wisdom shines on me

Never fading

Reviews

[Corset]

ahhh, there you are! There you are... Sir Willyam, unmasked, all of your face, you show us, what a magnificent day! You are beautiful friend! Your poem is alive and ready to face the world, come as you are for you are glorious! such a lovely bouyant write! well done!

[Pax]

:) Thank you, you noticed my picture...maybe someday..coz i still feel that im ugly and weird yet unique in my own ways..like everyone is..

[Sami Khalil]

This is an awesome poem with a lot of deep emotions and healing words...
You have outdone yourself dear poet...

[Pax]

Thank You Mr. Sami, I was just painting my emotions..its was hard but its worth to every word..

[Sami Khalil]

Good job... You are quite welcome...

[Mia]

Nothing heals more than love! It is a wonderful gift and it's always an amazing source of inpiration! I like this alot friend :)
"My black salted tears evaporated
By your brightly warm glow."
Too lovely!!

[Pax]

Its always a pleasure when you read and review my works my friend, so thank you so much. and i do agree love is the ultimate muse for inspirations..

[Mia]

I'm glad :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

"The wounds faded into scars

Leaving a mark of lamented past

Reminding me that I’ve learned

I came back to this wondrous existence with you at my side

I bid farewell to the dying lands of grief"~ This is a wonderfully written piece!... Full of hope...uplifting words of wisdom.

[Pax]

Thank you so much my friend, I really appreciate your review. :)

[Marie]

Beautiful words of healing and love...good to read something positive fromyou...

[Pax]

Yes its a positivism of healing a broken soul. Thanks Marie, its always a pleasure to hear from you.

[FJ Davis]

I hope things continue to work out--better yet, greatly improve.
Your deeply felt emotions were splashed all over the page in this one, Will.

[Pax]

:) thank you Mr. Frank, painting such imagery is hard but worthwhile..

[.]

Truly amazing how u write poems always has a positive side! 100/100

[Pax]

thank you so much my friend.

[.]

you're welcome! :D

[emmajoy]

Whilst your emotions are more than obvious, somehow i feel this is a little melodramatic, could be more subtle. Maybe some of the wording could be more contained .. but then, when feelings are strong, it's true that one shouts to be heard.

The way you've displayed this is more than elegant, the whole is clear and meaningful ..

[Pax]

Thank you my friend for your honest feedback, I'm always honored with your review..