I Give Up...

another quick little write

i gave up all hope and walked away

just hoped you had love for me i pray,

left me bloody and breathless

you made me weary, tired, and restless

find me rotting away in my tomb of lonesome

just left here hoping my heart can grow some...

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[yo mama]

grow some ballzzz!!!! lol but jk.....................u should turn this into a song!! >:)

[Luna Northstar]

A short poem impacted with a lot of meaning.... Your word choice was great, and the last to lines were amazing.

As always, you wrote an amazing poem. Nice job, Kerri =)

100/100