My Only..

i cant run anymore

i fall before you

here i am

i have nothing left

though ive tried to forget

your all that i am

take me home

im through fighting it...

....broken....life less

..i give up

your my only strength

without you, i cant go on anymore...

...my only hope...all the times that ive tried

my only peace

...to walk away from you

my only joy , my only strength

my only power

i fall into your abounding grace

constantly ignoring the pain consuming me

but this time the pains too deep...

Reviews

[Emunah June.]

Never give up! Stay strong and keep on truckin!! :D

[Luna Northstar]

=( A very sad, and deep poem. You always manage to pour you whole self into your writing... I can never leave one of your poems and forget about it. The message, the words, they stay stuck in your brain. I like how you gave us details about what "your only" is, but you don't directly write it. Therefore, the poem is very relate able.

Overall, as always, amazing job =) You really are a great writer. 100/100