Sky-'Life'

This is another song from our band

My heart cries out in pain
My fears being so vague
Not a soul that I can confide into
Crying silently, under the dark sky

Left alone, ploughing on,
Relentlessly, in this battle of life
Not a soul to which I can sing (to)
Moving quietly, under the empty sky

Sometimes, I cry
Empty my vessel, of Pain
And sadness, When I
Can Take no more

My fears being so vague
Not a soul in this creation
That would suffice
Lying motionless, In this wicked world

Not a soul to which I can sing (to)

Ploughing on, on this road of life
Trying, frutilessly, to make this fruitful

But then, (I) See the sun shining
from the back of the dark clouds,
Sky always stays clear, It's just the temporary patches
Of the dark clouds
That covers up the face of the sky

Even the darkest patch of the most menancing ones,
Results in downpour, Heavy rain,
Fruitful, at least, In a way

So, (I) move along, desparate (for) my clouds to rain
To bear the fruit, on the tree of my (ages/years),
That I've grown,
Ploughing on, on this field of life

Author's Note

As usual, this song is not yet complete and is unedited. Please bear with it and watch this peice for further developments.

Reviews

[Legion]

Although the wording isn't bad, I'd like to hear it to get a better feel for it.