A Need to Bleed

 

 

The body..unable to carry

Its own blood

So it decided to just

Get rid of it

For a very little price,

It has offered it

But...no customers have asked for it

The body put..extra discount

But still…none!

As a gift?

 for nothing?

Still, nobody cared!

The body decided

 however the pain,

I will cut a vein

To get clean

Of every drop of it

 

Who would afford such blood

With all of this sorrow in it?

Such blood is useless

In a world of carelessness

 

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Too much blood is being spilled. Need less spilling of blood. Good men and woman need to gather and rebirth peace and friendship. I feel sad and disappointed
when I hear of people in this world dying for leaders who have no concern for families left alone and cities destroyed. War lead to bleeding a nation dried. No-one wins in war and desire to bleed. Need forgiveness and tear for the millions who died for the profit of hate and profit. Thank you for the excellent poem. Need no more blood. Need peace for all woman and children to be safe.
Coyote

[Pax]

Such blood is useless
In a world of carelessness
~greediness of others makes us bleed to the point its useless..that's what i see in this poem
such sad write

[MOON]

Poignant lovely write , bleeding hearts and souls what is there worth.

[khalid]

thank you MOON for your fast review..