fool idol

worst when you love someone who is in love

For long time,
My heart has been
Beating of love to her
So I decided to declare
How much i do really love her
So, to dinner in a romantic place,
I have invited her
The night before;
Shaved my beard
My ever best suit,
Was what I wore

 

What a place!
Very nice breeze
Romantic music
While we were sitting

 face to face
Shall I now tell her
About what I feel?
I started to feel my heart dancing
When she started, to tell me
About the secret she wanted
Me to share
That I am nice,
I always care
Sure!
Tell me! Let me share!

 

She started to tell me..
How much she loves him
And she wants me to help her
To be able to be with him
Oh no…
Who turned off the light?
Or that's me who got blind?
Where am i? what happened?
She continued..
I have already heard
He is your friend
So I need your recommend
Let him notice me…

Why doesn’t she just stop?
How can I make her shut up??
Her voice which always was musical
Relaxing, comforting, peaceful
Is now my ever most dreadful
If she was a human being,
She would be more careful,
Or felt how much it is painful
To talk only about him
While she was with another one
If she has some sense
Some little intelligence
She would observe
My annoyance
While she throws her bombs
She turned to be a hell stone
On me it was thrown
Burning the deepest in me!
He is my friend, shall I tell her
The truth behind him?
That for him, she isn’t the first one?
And she can never be
The last one
What if I tell her, and she tells him?
I will lose him then
And for her, she is already lost
When she fell in him
And now for me, she is completely forbidden
Let time then show us what would happen
And for me, it was killed
The love that
Never begun 

Author's Note

just written it

Reviews

[Michael X]

the love that was never balanced, a sad-one sided affair of the heart,
the passion behind the flow is concise and well defined, great job!

[Lady of the Ring]

hmmm.....this one is more difficult to decipher. i feel the heartbreak, and the concern. wonderfully composed

[Pax]

sad, can be considered true. so much emotion. just the flow of rhyme and it really fits well to be enjoyed. wonderful words.

[The Pain Stays Fresh]

That's so sad..... It's very good though. You're an awesome poet. I don't think I've read any of your work that I didn't like. :)

[Jim Pike]

I like that the buddy was given such consideration. The sudden twist gives the piece tension and I wanted to keep reading.

[Corey Coreys]

this is so true about love and life and loss. I don't know how else to say how this poem is...but by saying one word...TRUTH. great job capturing that which is impossible to say but too important to leave silent.

[Aditi Mahajan]

Nice expression.....it happens in love...

[persianleopard]

This is so good. I enjoyed this very much. :)

[SAHAJ]

amazing poem....!! :)
emotional and touching..... !!

[Jadey]

Oh.. I felt sad.. but the feelings you have writing this is very touching. I felt it.