beauty

 

some people are into kids

some may like money

others love power and authority

but for me, i adore beauty

and you are, extremely pretty

so you are for me, priceless

although i dont know why you are

greedy like this

when God distributed beauty,

you have got all of it

left only small bit

all other creatures share in it

and you even haven't left it

you have got your share even in it

when you are in a street,

all eyes you get

making men feet stuck to the asphelt

not caring they may have an accident

 

when i am asked, what beauty is

i point at you and say....(this)

they reply..no beauty is less

than that found in this

but what to do?no words in languages

can describe you my mistress!

 

 

Reviews

[Suditi]

Wow.
A beautiful poem.

[Black Hole Halo]

Nice dude- good job- I liked it, I can relate to it...pretty girls make pretty worlds.

[Forthegoodandthebadiwil..]

I loved it. Though your talking about a mistress, i think about Justin Bieber! Haha!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. I like the flow of thoughts and the description of real beauty in a life.
"when i am asked, what beauty is
i point at you and say....(this)"
A strong ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Lily Mae]

And beauty is this :) xo

[Destinyxi]

some people are into kids

I raised my eyebrow at that hahaha. Really nice poem :)

greedy like this
when God distributed beauty,
you have got all of it

I like that part the most ^

[patricia]

Last stanza was deep ... a poem touching other realms. Enjoyed.

[Cree Nations]

Good write, I enjoyed it more when I read it out loud.
Thanks

Very nicely written write

[Renée]

Very Pretty Poem !