beauty

 

some people are into kids

some may like money

others love power and authority

but for me, i adore beauty

and you are, extremely pretty

so you are for me, priceless

although i dont know why you are

greedy like this

when God distributed beauty,

you have got all of it

left only small bit

all other creatures share in it

and you even haven't left it

you have got your share even in it

when you are in a street,

all eyes you get

making men feet stuck to the asphelt

not caring they may have an accident

 

when i am asked, what beauty is

i point at you and say....(this)

they reply..no beauty is less

than that found in this

but what to do?no words in languages

can describe you my mistress!

 

 

Reviews

[Aditi Mahajan]

Your poem is full of beauty!

[Mockingbird]

your mistress is lucky to have someone who appreciates her and makes her feel so good about herself. there can be no way she could feel insecure in your faithfulness to her. great job.

[Corey Coreys]

Khalid- can you stop being amazing at everything for like one minute? Hehe, just teasing. This is so great! I love the sweetness of it and the great use of the elipces ... Yet again another amazing poem :) Keep it up :D

[MOON]

Love your first four lines almost a complete poem there.