No Music To Dance To

slide off me

my new silver 

dress

let's hit this club

with a bang

a show they've never seen before

let's make them scream

and shout

let's do anything tonight

let's do everything tonight

let's dance

dirty

like we're the only thing we should be worried about

tonight

nobody ever came this close to me

dance on me

swing me around and around

until i get dizzy

even if i do 

that's alright

coz i have you now

caress me

take me back 

it's another time and another place

there's no space for complaints

so show me how you feel tonight

take me to your bed

and show me how you feel

after swinging

after flinging

god, my hips are sore

but you could fix that, right?

Reviews

[Shah Sabia]

Lovely write, feelings going through all the words.

[Jen Walters]

I would put a mature rating on this one just in case someone takes this the wrong way. It's beautifully romantic to me, well written and highly descriptive. I love reading your pieces as they can so easily be related to. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece and have a great day.

[FaeryQueen]

gladly, but i'd rather not on the warning tip.

[Jen Walters]

I know why, just trying to protect your work, besides what if a little kid saw this?

[FaeryQueen]

you're totally right but then he won't be able to see them and he doesn't have an account. i told him to read my poetry, he really likes them a lot

[Jen Walters]

who does likes your poetry?

[FaeryQueen]

my man...........

[Jen Walters]

That's great, my man loves my poetry too, I have over 80 poems so far, and am trying to work on more