Don't Go

poem/song; for him

let me in

don't shut me out

coz i'm falling from your eyes

don't let me go

the sun is setting in the sky

and now

there's nothing i won't do

i'm tryna find my way to you

i'm so blind i cannot see

and we're falling in line

falling in line

you're falling behind

falling behind

your heart beat

doesn't sound the same like mine

and you're still so sweet

it doesn't matter if we collide

coz we're still going to 

anyway

anyday

when will the next time we meet

come around

my heart is beating

but it makes no sound

your voice is rising

from where we were

but the pictures on my wall

are making sense

as we fall

you're unconventional

our love so unintentional

your heart so deep

emotional

this time

its us

so

please don't leave me

i'll try

harder

until we fall

so please

don't speak

i'll try 

my love

i'll try

don't go

please don't go

Reviews

[Jen Walters]

Such a lighthearted poem, and well written. Emotional, and to the point, as well as direct. Thanks for sharing yet another great piece with me and have a great day.

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

keep going with this, it feels unfinished