i'm losing it all

for him

you're gone

and i'm here

all alone

come save me

i was just about to call

but i gave up 

coz they were telling me to 

coz it didn't feel the same

anymore

that high

that drive

drove away from me

and now i'm losing it all

you're still gone

are you ever gonna come back 

and tell me you love me again

i know you say it every day

but baby

you're still gone

and i'm still here

all alone

i was just about to call

but i forgot

i was supposed to be 

losing it all

Reviews

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

feeling abound but missing structure and clear sense of rhythm.

[Jen Walters]

Another very realistic and relatable poem. Your writing is wonderfully emotional, I enjoy them all. Thanks for sharing yet another well written piece and as always have a great day.