did i do something wrong?

did i do something wrong?

A Poem by FaeryQueen
"

for him

"
no
you'd say
no, you didn't
then what was it
that pulled us a part ~[{[(not a part, but that's the way i wrote it)]}]~
wait!
i forgot!
i know!
it was them
but it wasn't their fault
for keeping me safe
i love you
but
did i do something wrong?

© 2015 FaeryQueen


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for me a bit ambiguous as to what is what and who is who. first part i dig a lot

Posted 9 Years Ago


I have often asked my husband this after a disagreement. Sometimes I did do something wrong, sometimes it was him, but we are both getting comfortable with admitting who is right and who is wrong. Such an emotional and relatable piece. Thanks for sharing this and have a great day.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on August 11, 2015
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