Impenetrable Ghosts

on the spot

as my heart beats like the soft clang

produced by stars 

the moon hangs by my dreams

when the sun swears never to rise up

i am at peace

feeding on the argumentative energy

their aura is dark

may we collapse?

it's a start

cast the shadow of our love

the moon will protect us from corruption

the sun will protect us from exhaustion

the stars will keep up immortal

by the lies we tell ourselves

and the mistakes we keep repeating

Reviews

[Jen Walters]

I love the shorter poems more than the longer poems. They are easier to read, and the message to me comes out louder and clearer than in your longer ones. But that's just my opinion here. This poem is another great piece of writing and is easy to enjoy. Thanks for sharing such a well written poem and have a great day.

[Shah Sabia]

A sensible write.
Keep it up.