no thanks

it feels

so long

since we met

eternal

eternity

infinity

i could go on

but right now

we are alone

and my emotions

have been amplified

salted lightly with patience and modesty

so no thanks

i'm good

coz it feels as if i've waited all my life

for something temporary

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[Girl With A Pen]

"it feels as if i've waited all my life
for something temporary"

This is a very strong stanza...simply my favorite. Your words are very strong and this poem is wonderful