Just Because

on the spot

tell me that just because i am a part of this culture

i cannot love like i want to

i keep waiting 

all my life

and yet now seems so official

but

don't worry

coz i've been frantic about it too

i know what i've been doing is wrong

but my feelings for you were just too strong

and now

i can't help but think back

to what we were

something is different now

way too obtuse

i didn't mean to interlude

but i felt something 

everything is always too obstacilius 

full of thorny passageways

that i'd die to get through

to you

but it hails true, too

i am a soul

yet, bound

and unbound the rules 

no matter what you do

you just can't bend them entirely

i guess

just because i am a part of this

fiasco

means i

too

am condemned

to the life already wrote down

for me

 from centuries ago

Reviews

[Jen Walters]

After reading many of your poems you have a gift, you really do. This is another beautiful write, easy to read, easy to enjoy. Thanks for sharing, I don't however think that any of us are condemned to live, say, or do anything with our life. Life is full of choices and its our choices that condemn us to the path that we are on. Thanks for sharing such a well written poem and have a great day.

[Girl With A Pen]

I am simply stunned by your brilliant work...you have such a talent for allowing people see through your eyes

[FaeryQueen]

i feel like Obama just said those words. my heart is just uplifted... thank you, i usually doubt my poetry, but i write it anyways because it expresses my feelings. that's why i write what i write.
every one of my poems are like pomegranite seeds, they burst with a certain sense of story, all of my words just jumble together in real life... in poetry they somehow make sense to me.

[Girl With A Pen]

"i usually doubt my poetry, but i write it anyways because it expresses my feelings."
" in poetry they somehow make sense to me."

Wow...do you know what you sound like to me? A real writer... :)
I look forward to reading more of your work...I too dislike my own writing but cannot stop myself from writing. Writing is the only thing that makes sense to me

[FaeryQueen]

truly you are very talented, i look forward to viewing your work!

[Girl With A Pen]

Thank you, it means a lot