hard heart

on the spot; monologue

my love

we're just drifting along

the storms passed

the sun is singing her song

and maybe this was what was written for us

i admit

i haven't been reading for awhile

and now i know 

that this was supposed to happen

this

storm is what made us

this storm

of hard hearts

Reviews

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

only revision i would dare make is incorporate has to storms in line two that way the tense stays true
ex. the storm has passed....i dont think this injures your poem in any way. lovely

[Jen Walters]

Thanks for sharing this! It's wonderful, I love it. Keep on writing and have a great day.

[Kay]

Beautiful words! I think the formatting could have been better, but in all, it's beautiful! Well done! :)