My Last Breath

My Last Breath

A Poem by FaeryQueen
"

on the spot

"
atrocities
among calamity
against catastrophes
what have i done
but graze a single human
stripped him of his hide
with my
bare
teeth?

demons
abound this city
my game of thrones
but this time
no one escapes
everyone is 
a
predator
and yet
at the same time
prey
prey
prey
feast on 
the abundance
of human skin
feel
their
screaming drowning
out our own
in satisfaction
for
its been a long while 
since
i've had my fill

beady eyes
quick paced hearts
and their hands
tied behind
their backs
like chickens
in a slaughterhouse
the hell hole for animals
roles reversed
now
the prey
get their revenge

how many tears
have i 
had to cry
for this to take place
for my friends
to finally get
what 
they 
deserve?
is it hard
for you
my dear
human friends
to reach in the inner sides of your emotions
to feel the pain
that which these poor beings have to go through
to get even a morsel
inside of you

my last breath
i swear to you
will be with them
the 
ones
who hail true
pure hearts
and innocence abound
with natures toy
and a flower 
crown

© 2015 FaeryQueen


Author's Note

FaeryQueen
this one is about animal cruelty. and my apparent strong emotions toward that.

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Well well. Very strong and intense poem, dear poet.
The imagery is so vivid and touching I got goosebumps, at one point.
You touched a very unconventional but much-needed-to-talk-about subject, with integrity and candour.
Your idea resonated with mine. I was myself a non vegetarian once for as long as two decades but everything changed the moment I realised the graveness of the act. I turned into a pure vegetarian then.
Your piece also stands out for the long forgotten moral lesson it delivers.
And if this was a then & there written poem, then you are very talented.
Keep up the good work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

FaeryQueen

9 Years Ago

it was
i surprised myself. yet again! ahahaha thank you sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!
Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.



Reviews

Well well. Very strong and intense poem, dear poet.
The imagery is so vivid and touching I got goosebumps, at one point.
You touched a very unconventional but much-needed-to-talk-about subject, with integrity and candour.
Your idea resonated with mine. I was myself a non vegetarian once for as long as two decades but everything changed the moment I realised the graveness of the act. I turned into a pure vegetarian then.
Your piece also stands out for the long forgotten moral lesson it delivers.
And if this was a then & there written poem, then you are very talented.
Keep up the good work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

FaeryQueen

9 Years Ago

it was
i surprised myself. yet again! ahahaha thank you sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much!
Jyoti_Ablaze

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
This is an awesome write... awesome topic :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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