A part of me

A random thought

The shinning stars look down upon me...

The endless hours bring a question to me...

Who am I losing, who do I gain?

When a part of me dies in vain!!!

The dawn and the dusk leaves a shadow behind,

The paint in the brush, cant imprint the design

Because the pain they feel when they are closing down..

A red colour cant define their falling crown!!!

Author's Note

wat do u thnk abt the verse????

Reviews

[Briana O'Connor]

There is great emotional expression in this piece with added imagery that piques the imagination. Many takes can come from this piece. I love when people right with a sense of emotional mystery leaving each reader to let their heart draw the conclusion that seeps into their soul.
Thank you for sharing and please return the favor by reviewing one of my pieces.

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i love that last one. it short and very moving . not useless words. i realy love it