the walking story of locke voltaire adelio (chapter one: realizing you)

the walking story of locke voltaire adelio (chapter one: realizing you)

A Poem by kill the innocents

chapter one: realizing you

What if I say that I’m a vampire?
Then our love not gonna be like Edward and Bella.
What if i die in a car crash?
Then your love is not eternity.
What if a guy is better than me?
Then you need to work harder to get me.
What if you are married?
Then you should give up with your love.
What is i say i love you?
Then maybe all that never gonna happen. .

© 2010 kill the innocents


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Just don't give up on what you want and whom you having feelings for. be strong, not just physically, but mentally. If someone knocks you down, you just got pick yourself up and dust yourself off and keep your head high and walk with pride

(: Makayla

Posted 13 Years Ago


The maybe of life can leave us confused. A very interesting poem. Funny part of life. Never know what tomorrow may be. A very good poem. I like poetry with questions.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I feel love should not be based on what if's but on what is. People often love for the wrong reasons or they love the wrong person for the right reasons. I feel you poem is asking this question as to why people chose to love. Good write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 16, 2010
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kill the innocents

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I'm not the most eloquent speaker, so I thought I would borrow a few words from Shakespeare. 'Love is not love which alters when it alteration finds.' When life gets hard, when things change, true lov.. more..

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