(my not good poem)

i think its sucks alot

i just come down to see you,
see if you've done anything good,
see if you've another guy,...

life is unfair,
but that's what they say,
i'm here to watch you sleep,
at the same time,
i'm here to take you with me...

i know that im selfish,,
but its you..
that making me confuse..
whether my love..
is for you..
or nothing..

you said no second chance..
i said i love you..
you said i dont..
and i kissed you..

but there's no time ..
to love you back..
so i make my decision..
leaving you..

i want to be with you at my very last moment..
but my condition dont allow me to..

so im writing this love song for you..
i hope you like it..
but i never make it..
just the first line..
"im not sorry for knowing you"
for you..

Reviews

[misha]

It's a good piece, the only thing I woud change would be a few grammar errors, other than that great job.