Conjure!

Autumn - a truly magical time of year!

All hallows breath nears necks at last,

Her time of year beckons close from past,

A torrid word makes men fall free,

The twisted branch now on a spree,

Feeling tired one must push through,

For eyes of blood are now upon you,

The darkness dawns above come down,

Splitting roots to wake soon the crown,

Petals swim in brews of apple stars,

One more prick to draw red in scars,

Be quite now imps more spills innate,

Flash in bowls once rust and ingrate,

Split thy fingers and tore the sky,

Bind her knees above supple thigh,

Cast our spirit to land in hill folk,

Whisper rhyme never loud he spoke,

Goodnight for now as ghosts unchained,

A smile tells truth now truly unstained.

Author's Note

Just something fun to take the edge off.

Reviews

[sakshi arora]

Petals swim in brews of apple stars,
One more prick to draw red in scars,

Be quite now imps more spills innate,
Flash in bowls once rust and ingrate,

Split thy fingers and tore the sky,
Bind her knees above supple thigh,

Cast our spirit to land in hill folk,
Whisper rhyme never loud he spoke,

Goodnight for now as ghosts unchained,
A smile tells truth now truly unstained.
quite awesome u have come a notch higher :)

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you.

[MomzillaNC]

I could almost hear Vincent Price quoting these lines as I read…

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

fabulous - that was a very distinctive voice!

[MomzillaNC]

No one could deliver a macabre line better!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

I agree - well maybe Anne Rice in the guise of one of her Vampires!

[MomzillaNC]

Well, I agree she composes some amazing macabre lines. But, I never heard Vincent Price's voice that it didn't send chills up my spine!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

agreed - chilling!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i really like this...my favorite time of the year....the ghosts unchained...brews of apple stars...

the goblins are partying to your poem, Thomas.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you.

[Colton Warr]

I can tell you probably had a lot of fun creating this piece! Very well written. Creepy yet fun vibes here. Well done, I love it! Thanks for writing!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

Funny and creepy at the same time. I like the rhyming scheme too. Excellent Thomas...:)......

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you.

[Lyn Anderson]

This has a fun but creepy feel, like a man dancing around a campfire reciting a fanciful poem for the kiddies. Nice piece.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Thank you KL!