Silent Love

For good Father's everywhere.

A look that would kill,

Two hands of hard working,

His thoughts of protection,

His children were sulking,

A man of true grace,

A man of true pride,

Loyal and sundry,

His thoughts never slide,

His pain be unbearable,

His joints did cease in,

He wouldn't give up,

Not for his kin.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very strong poem for any Father who get tested and stays strong for family. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokhar..]

Splendid work :)

[raindroplove]

hmmmmm..............very good

[Daydreamer54]

That;s a real man right there! Working hard to support and protect his family! great write! ^^

[Tina Kline]

Nice, a poem about a strong, dependable man! I like it!

[Doreen]

A parent will do anything for a child. Nice.

[LA Lorena]

A well written piece, and a fine tribute to good fathers every where.

[An Ordinary Woman]

Wonderful tribute to fathers everywhere. Daddy's are pretty special guys deserving of that and more .... great writing.

[E.Gleaves]

love isn't always obvious especially parental love. I wanna see a face to the father but you do well describing his non physical characteristics. There's a lot more to the father's story you have yet to tell. If you ever think about expanding there is a lot more to write about