Eyes Wide Open.

A risky experiment of words.

ONE

To sleep - is to dream,

To dream - is to think,

To think - is to feel,

To feel  - is to blink.

TWO

To touch - is to sense,

To sense - is to reach,

To reach - is to give,

To give - is to get.

THREE

The eye - is to see,

To see - is to live,

To live - is to die,

To die - is to end.

Author's Note

I'm just experimenting with different style, all thoughts welcome.

Reviews

[Onku Ghosh]

A wonderful piece of wrting......very creative.I like the format of linking the words.Your experiment with words has really worked well.A good read...... is different.

[Betty]

Creative!!! "To dream is to think, To touch is to sense, To see is to live" i just love these lines.... Brilliant!!

[Revolutionary]

Creative.I like the style.I personaly think you should say
to die is to live again.
I have a hard time thinking of death as the end.I still like the poem alot.I just can not identify with the last line.My friend however says that death is the end and she completly agree's with you.You doomsdayers!!!
This is a great poem cause it has me and Noka arguing.How can you two believe there is nothing after death?Why would we waste all our lives becoming better people if it all ends in less than 100 years?

I have to go have a talk about death with my friend now.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the way you set-up the poem. Each words could have many meaning. I like words. Make reading and thinking worthwhile. Thank you for the very good poem.
Coyote

[RidingTheWind]

The simplicity of this poem helps to make it more powerful, and I love the style of linking everything together.

[Victoria]

raw truth right here :)

[roy mccarthy]

nice write!
all true!

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokhar..]

To thank- is to respect
To respect-is to honor

I ,hereby , thank you for your poem..Splendid

[☯]

Very straightforward, and true. :)