Gossip.

Gossip.

A Poem by Thomas Fitzgerald
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A play on poetry I've been reading lately.

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Standing solid upon the breaking ground,

I yeild to nature and only her not others,

Branded science leaves me here to die,

Not along with friends or indeed mothers.

 

You've felt the strenght of my loving you,

I beg of you no to listen with eager rate,

Do not turn and feel the stab of eyes,

Really, you don't want to feel my hate.

 

Pleading vomit has been sent to kill me,

I slap at motions not riddled with grit,

No movement of legs controled my mind,

The wind now wisps and holds no hit.

 

Borders are failing when walls come up,

Two men refuse to see eye to thought,

Wisdom has no place for fighting war,

Women lend gossip to those already caught.

© 2012 Thomas Fitzgerald


Author's Note

Thomas Fitzgerald
Honesty my darlings, honesty!

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I like it, its very true Thomas. I enjoyed reading this, it took me a little while to understand the full gist of it. But once I did I was in shock from it, its quite a powerful piece. Great work, get writing, you have quite a talented mystery from you. I like it. It'll take you far, good luck Thomas. (:

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Wow, your words totally gripped my tongue. Love the write:)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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To me, this seems to be written about someone who other people were talking negatively about but you didn't believe what they were saying even though they wanted you to believe the lies about this person. I thought it was worded beautifully and gave great analogy when describing the feelings.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Very nice write. I liked it and agree with you. You have lots of intellogence and I love the read thanks for the request :). Perfect write my friend.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Interesting!

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Such a true and powerful piece

Posted 12 Years Ago


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great lines here Thomas...Exceptional truths that make the reader question ones own social connections.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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OKAY!! so the more I read you the bigger fan I become!! I love your style!! TRUTH in poetic term... there is nothing better... and you express well here!! thank you for sharing!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This is a good piece, it reminds me of a dream I once had

Posted 12 Years Ago


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quick. typo. strength. second stanza, first line.

i really like the way you opened this, the collapsing world and the strength throughout the rest of it. i feel like there's this vane of power coursing through. impeccable.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I've found that gossip is everywhere. Human nature, jealousy, admiration, whatever. Someone once said "If people are talking behind your back, it means that you are ahead."

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