Mother Nature wonders

I stand in the water,

Breathing light as I step closer,

Stepping closer to that beautiful ocean,

I look up and see the sun just as its peek,

Going down for the night,

The evening sky so bright and beautiful,

The pinkness of the sky fills me with joy,

The little clouds,

So soft,

So smooth,

I reach my hands up as if I were touching them,

I put my hands around as if I were holding the sun,

That bright beautiful sun,

That gives me light every day,

I feel it in my hands,

So warm,

To warm,

but I don't care,

I feel it tingle in my hands,

Oh the sun and the clouds,

so wonderful,

Mother nature has its wonders,

but what's that?

Oh I wake from the water of the ocean tingling at my feet,

Each little salty piece of the ocean touches my feet,

Then suddenly I am in my bed,

No water or sand,

Or sun or clouds,

So back to sleep I go,

For that wonderful dream to come back again

Reviews

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I think you made a mistake with "to warm" there? Maybe you mean, "too warm"?
Anyway, I love the shape of the poem! I see tweety bird in a skirt. Haha.

Reality is better than dreams, go out of your room and explore nature! ;)

I'm thinking about the end when you said "So back to sleep I go, For that wonderful dream to come back again". Was the place where you live a nature-deprived city where you can't see the things in your dream? That's what I think...