Home

a song called Home by Mumford and Sons inspired this poem so if you like this you should look them up :) it's also from a guys point of view; just somethin different.

spin me round
just to pin me down
in that tall Nebraska wheat
swaying at our feet

i’ll be home in a little while
lover i’ll be home

we’ll sleep under starry light
knowing our love is bright
i'll kiss your lips red
nothing will go unsaid

i’ll be home in a little while
lover i’ll be home

wait for me there
no more time can i bear
two more minutes darling
please hear my calling

i’ll be home in a little while
lover i’ll be home

don’t stray too far
just listen to this guitar
listen close and you will see
all you need to do is wait for me

i’ll be home in a little while
lover i’ll be home

Reviews

[dukovan]

I like mumford as and sons. It's as if your were imangining being in the band on tour waiting to come back to girl he's writing about.

[Sunflower 20]

i loved it! great job, keep it up! :)

[Meghan]

I love this song, I actually have written a piece inspired by it as well :) I loved your take on it the last stanza especially. You write very well. Thanks for sharing!!!

[Mauricio Montoya]

nice work.

[Kyle]

A great song..... I may look up that band.

[Calypso]

Home is an amazing place. You wrote this well and described the emotions well.

[These Haunted Hallways]

Aw, this was nice :) Wonderful flow and style to it. Makes me think of the past a lot. Great job!! :)

[Lily Mae]

I love them and their music and I could feel that essence in this write.. Nicely done..xo :)

[Zachary_James]

Powerful write, this could be a song. Anyways loved it

[Chris]

I wonder the music you hear with this...