Monster

Poen about addiction

  I woke today with a beutiful mind.

Nobody stepping on my feet.

In a spirtual world I once knew

Finding once again after a long dark street.

 

My eyes were closed, my body chained.

To the mind altering monsters running the earth.

Finding every way to crash us down.

Ways to dig my grave since the day of birth.

 

But I'm beating this monster that i once consumed.

Im growing stronger every dying day.

My world is more brighter then ever.

What more can I say.

 

In a blink of an eye though, It can all be undone.

If i stop for a second and pick it up.

But with the spirtual power in my life, all is well.

All i need is water, no liquor in this cup.

 

I finally beat the monster and watched it fall.

Leaving me behind, giving me a chance.

Proving to myself the strenght I desire.

And finally happy with the person I can glance.

 

Im a beautiful heart now.

No reason for hiding anymore.

The monster is gone and not coming back,

And Im never giving up thats for sure.

Author's Note

Quick and simple to the point. Hope u like it, its definitly my journey!

Reviews

[MrKnowAll]

That's what I also like, simple to the point. The poem is optimistic ,giving us the example of you fighting off that monster, showing us that it's a possible task.

[Patrick Henry]

That was fun..... fun like a hug you learn to look for and enjoy!! You show some pretty form in this poem and it was very easy to understand and relate to it. very nice..... also sweet. : ) xoxo -Mark