Bliss

Bliss

A Poem by Kelly M.
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Romantic, somewhat sad poem filled with what bliss is! :)

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You reached down
For one last kiss
Our last moment
Of pure bliss

Will I ever
See you again?
And if I do
When?

How long can I hold back
Those silent tears
That just want to fall
During your absent years?

Promise me
You will return
Or my heart will seize
With forlorn

On the doorstep
I will wait
For you to appear
On our promised date
I'll run to you
When you arrive
Joy in my heart
Finally feeling alive
Then you reach down 
For a forever kiss
A special moment
Of pure bliss

© 2011 Kelly M.


Author's Note

Kelly M.
I wanted to focus on what I was trying to say through the words, so that you could get what I think can make you blissful. I hope you liked this! :)

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Awe so sweet with the rhyming of blissful kiss. This is how I want my first kiss to be. This will be my bliss so well done. Descriptions and all of the perfect bliss.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was amazing! Keep up the good work.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Sometimes you think you could live in one moment for the rest of your life, but you couldn't really because life does go on, and I think it's good it does. I mean, you need some time to look back on that moment and be grateful for how amazing it was. Anyway, I enjoyed this poem. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was extremley lovely. Fabulous job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Ah bliss. So many perceptions with very different people. You're view of bliss and my view of bliss are very different indeed, but I do have to say, you put yours out in a very unique way. Very interesting choice of topic to write about. Not many people feel that they can write down this state of happiness. You my friend, have succeeded(sp?). I understand your train of thought and I felt like that's how I believed it to be. Great job young padawan. xD

Posted 10 Years Ago


I absolutely love it!!!!! keep up the good job

Posted 10 Years Ago


Yes, you've accomplished in your purpose of writing this poem. I really like it! It's sweet and pure! Lovely :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love this! Great job! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


This was sweet and simply put :) I liked how the words flowed and I could tell you were writing from the heart which is always a good thing when you are writing poetry. Great job with this piece!!

~Erinne

Posted 10 Years Ago



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