Bliss

Bliss

A Poem by Kelly M.
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Romantic, somewhat sad poem filled with what bliss is! :)

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You reached down
For one last kiss
Our last moment
Of pure bliss

Will I ever
See you again?
And if I do
When?

How long can I hold back
Those silent tears
That just want to fall
During your absent years?

Promise me
You will return
Or my heart will seize
With forlorn

On the doorstep
I will wait
For you to appear
On our promised date
I'll run to you
When you arrive
Joy in my heart
Finally feeling alive
Then you reach down 
For a forever kiss
A special moment
Of pure bliss

© 2011 Kelly M.


Author's Note

Kelly M.
I wanted to focus on what I was trying to say through the words, so that you could get what I think can make you blissful. I hope you liked this! :)

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Awe so sweet with the rhyming of blissful kiss. This is how I want my first kiss to be. This will be my bliss so well done. Descriptions and all of the perfect bliss.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was amazing! Keep up the good work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sometimes you think you could live in one moment for the rest of your life, but you couldn't really because life does go on, and I think it's good it does. I mean, you need some time to look back on that moment and be grateful for how amazing it was. Anyway, I enjoyed this poem. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was extremley lovely. Fabulous job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ah bliss. So many perceptions with very different people. You're view of bliss and my view of bliss are very different indeed, but I do have to say, you put yours out in a very unique way. Very interesting choice of topic to write about. Not many people feel that they can write down this state of happiness. You my friend, have succeeded(sp?). I understand your train of thought and I felt like that's how I believed it to be. Great job young padawan. xD

Posted 9 Years Ago


I absolutely love it!!!!! keep up the good job

Posted 9 Years Ago


Yes, you've accomplished in your purpose of writing this poem. I really like it! It's sweet and pure! Lovely :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love this! Great job! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


This was sweet and simply put :) I liked how the words flowed and I could tell you were writing from the heart which is always a good thing when you are writing poetry. Great job with this piece!!

~Erinne

Posted 9 Years Ago



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