omission

the door will never be closed for me

maybe i was an illusion

you had few physical clues

but if my heart wasn't on those pages

it jumped off

and was found by someone else

i took all the letters

and i threw them back into the air

the combination must of made you blind

you bubbled up inside me like carbonation

then you left me flat

yesterday i went down by

East Mission creek

across the water

i saw an eight feet drop

into the water

and i said

how appropriate 

how appropriate

sometimes i wish i was an animal

i saw some of them

in and around the creek

no politics, no past

just a stumble into attraction

Reviews

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I am missing your picture to know its you for sure :) But this is very sensitive compared to your previous writing I've read. *rose* cheers tuni from AP.

[karmax]

To be an animal in silence, maybe a muse, maybe a wonder. Yet to still be the happiest of all souls...amazing! Nicely written!

[deedeekm]

the confusion of relationships - I think you might be on to something. Animals don't obsess or hold grudges..well said.