say

you laugh

and you say

you're so sensitive

and i say

you're the blood in my heart

you giggle and you turn red

and i say

i see i have some more work to do

and you say

oh stop

and i say

i cannot stop

just as i cannot stop the race of my heart

when i enter a room

with you in it

and you say

really

and i say

nothing could be more real than

the love i feel for you

nothing

and you melt

collapse into my arms

and say

i'm better at hiding it than you

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

What a beautifully written poem. It so speaks from the heart. I felt such joy reading it. thanks for such inspiring writing. Love em!!

[WindSong]

A beautiful love poem with much heart and soul.

[teddybard]

Specially worded love poem, needs to be read more than once, as ever in your own impeccable style.

[karmax]

This is great. I can feel your words here like they are my own. I like that your emotions are very well and clearly portrayed to the reader! Great work!

[Daytonight]

Very well done! Once again you prove that you are the Sir Knight of Romance! This is a very beautiful love poem. Keep up the great work!