dust rose

shaving the roses

dropping them into an envelope

sending them west

frustrated by 57 hours

i send you messages

but there is no reply

there is no synchronicity to

communication

and i must admit

my overworked amnesia has

made me forget

how you feel

what you feel

maybe i have forgotten nothing

and i'm merely inside

a curiosity phase

sleep deprivation robs me

but i plant seeds

sending them toward the sun

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

This poem brought me to my knees!! The feelings which over take my being when I read your written words is at times indescribeable. Beautiful Poem!!

[Daytonight]

Well penned. I hope you finally get some rest for your sleep deprived brain. Love the roses in the first stanza. Keep on penning.

[Raven Starhawk]

Closely I view this as thoughts within my own head. You composed these words from a beautiful soul that projects wisdom in every arch. Beautifully done.

[teddybard]

Moving in a special way.

[WindSong]

An absolutely beautiful poem with so much feeling expressed throughout!
Great work!

WindSong