family history

family history

A Poem by knightcall

I.
nothing can hurt you like blood or
some semblance of relationship
i've got a family that passes down criticism 
and it winds up landing on me
my brother the drama king
takes my mother along for the ride
the holiest of rituals of
water and entrance
he wanted to bar me from the cathedral door
the day of the baptism 
i sat in a restaurant
calling my mom
telling her when we would meet up
she went into a rage and
trying to calm her down
i attracted the attention of
some punk eating with his daddy
the smirk across his face
i wanted to put him through
the linoleum wall
outside the church
my brother shook my hand
as if he was the bigger man
i had no need to remind myself
my brother with the baby had
no problem at all with me attending
so i went to the party
and my sister-in-law took
my picture with my nephew
her sister hugged me
despite meeting me hours before 
that's the way
it should be
II.
the news was relayed to me
the house was not as clean
as it should
add that to
the tossed telegram that
i don't own up to what i do
tell me why
you only know debits
and forget the credits
tell me why
once upon a time
you used to brag about me
now you send your bombs via courier
when we
buried your husband
i stood up
and eulogized him
i took care of your daughter
sent you newspapers
intended to make you laugh
but now i'm the guy not good enough to
help you carry in your bags
tell me when
i went from gold to dust
III.
i'm not looking for love
but if it comes to me

© 2011 knightcall


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A great truth stands behind this...nice one's finish last! I know, trust me if i was to pen my family ties...I'd be penning for weeks on end...but call me an over analyzer..as the rest stand with there hands out waiting for the feel is owed to them! Nicley penned knight! Straight and forward, ending it in not only style but with great depth of insight!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow! Very descriptive. Could picture the whole scenario in my mind. Well done. Like the last part best. Keep on penning.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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knightcall
knightcall

Shawnee Mission, KS



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A trauma chaplain at an inner city hospital. Formerly a sportswriter, a native of Chicago. Now living in the Heartland. more..

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A Poem by knightcall