Surrender

I'm going now away from here
My eyes are getting tired
I wish that I could fly away
That's why I say my prayers.

Walk with me, come with me
I'm afraid to be alone
Kiss with me and die for me
It's sometimes always dawn.

I'm cold and weak now
Surrounded by your thoughts
I drive away, I'm getting slaved
I cry but not a lot.

Hear my wispers, walk with me
And die for my surrenders
My wish is one - a kiss from you
So sweet, so clean, so tender.

The night is coming
With the raindrop of my tears
My worst fear is to be alone
And the winter is almost here.

Warm me up and hear my wispers
I'm cold, i'm weak - I suffer
I want to be the one you wait for
Or am I to surrender...

Reviews

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Well expressed, confused to the point where you must just surrender.

Thanks for entering my contest and the best of luck.

[Jorge Ramos]

i really love the way you write.
great job.