A Complete Disaster

First write on one of these......

What an ordeal!

Feels so unreal.....

I will tell you,

this is how beget woes,

it is nothing new,

so listen, here goes....

 

I love somebody, who loves somebody else, who loves somebody else, who loves somebody else, who loves somebody else, who just happens to love me...

 

What cosmic chaos formed this chain?

What will keep us all from going insane?

I will tell you,

this is how I''ll mend it......

The only thing I can do,

is force this chain to split....

 

I love somebody, who loves somebody else, who loves somebody else, who loves somebody else, who loves somebody else, who just happens to love me...

 

Stopping suddenly could cause an infraction,

that could wrench away all of our satisfaction.

I will tell you,

that I am afraid of failing....

If not for my heart being blue,

this would all be such smooth sailing....

 

I love somebody, who is dating somebody else, who loves somebody else, who is married to somebody else, who is messing around with somebody else, who just happens to be stalking me!

 

Well, just how horrific this is goes without saying.

I now have to plan ahead to where I'll be staying.

I will tell you,

that I am afraid of this stalker.....

If not for whatever I knew,

I think I thought her to be a talker....

 

I loved somebody, who is dating somebody else, who loves somebody else, who is married to somebody else, who is messing around with somebody, WHO just happened to have murdered me!

Reviews

[Dizzy-Izzy]

Very scary Jeff, I hope it's not art imitating life, or vice versa...

[Becca]

Aside from Guitar Hero Tourette's this is exceptional and scary...lol
Outstanding!

[MorganLyn]

haha very good poem. I enjoyed it. especially the prgression of the person who became the stalker.
great write!

[Jane Doe]

Oh, I love this poem! I especially like the progression of the lines 'I love somebody, who...' You did a wonderful job with rhyme. All around this is a great poem!