The Circle Of Life

The Circle Of Life

A Poem by BlueLagoon
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Haikus are Haikool

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The circle of life
Three hundred sixty degrees
Of pleasure and pain

© 2011 BlueLagoon


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It is a tad short. Although, I love the meaning. This piece was written beautifully. Great work!

Posted 12 Years Ago
It's a bit short but it does carry some meaning.

Posted 12 Years Ago
A nice haiku. You should try you hand at the variations in form. It may be fun to do a mobius or an infinite loop with a palindrome.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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it is just perfect
your words make sense like they should
keep writing haikus

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice circumference of feeling as words
in the measurement of perfection in verse...good stuff

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the simplicity of the sounded words, well done

Posted 12 Years Ago


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BlueLagoon
BlueLagoon

Miami, FL



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