Upside Down

Upside Down

A Poem by LivingHope.

You said Hello

 

After a long goodbye;

 

Oblivious to the time.

 

 

My mended heart,

 

now fractured again,

 

is bleeding old tears.

 

 

Gone is the urge

 

to remain calm;

 

Falling to pieces again.

 

Those words of mine

 

which caused you anger,

 

Made my life turn.

 

Upside Down.

© 2009 LivingHope.


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The spacing was too extravagant =P
The rest was elegantly done. Great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very simple yet great poem. :D Keep writing. :D

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Hello! I'm Stewie, which is my basketball nickname. I'm a 15 year old girl and I have been writing since I was 10. I love reading and writing. I play basketball almost year round. When I write, I usua.. more..

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