INK-WHITE PALM

01 17 12

The poor left hand
left to hopelessly
smoulder in resentment
of the secret
of the right

(The privilege)

Dermatological
rude mechanical
monopoly

the destiny-approved
fence of bone
fictitious neighbours
in vision nonetheless
real as the eye
sole denominator
of existence's
acknowledgement
and (of)
perpetuity

while the signatured
guesswork or disgruntled
placement theorizing at best
courts a dry paper
eager to for once
satisfy its historical
preference for
the opposition

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Oh I recognize this, my son if left-handed, and gripes about it all the time, instead you've written some abstruse poetic references, which of course are genius Dali! You don't have to be a southpaw to appreciate this one! ;) xo

[kublakhan27]

Haha I'm so glad you knew what I was talking about, but you always do Mrs.R ;) I'm surprised to get a review from one so old, especially considering a hundred people read it, and zero said a single word...but that's irrelevant now...I'm just thrilled that you found this piece (I didn't think you would given its age) and understood it...thank you love :) xo

[Frieda P]

You calling me old Benji??!! haha ;-)

[kublakhan27]

Haha Just the poem Mrs.R ;) xo

[Frieda P]

I got that, couldn't help myself haha ;P x

[Frieda P]

Seriously how do you get 115 views and no 'reviews'....shaking my head, they just don't know Dali genius when they read it Benji! ;) x

[kublakhan27]

Haha Trust me, I'm trying really hard not to ponder on that right now love, especially given the way the day started ;P It doesn't matter, your support is all that matters :) x

[Frieda P]

We'll have to hit that note in a collaboration ;) x

[kublakhan27]

Indeed ;) x

[Frieda P]

Does your contract allow you to collaborate Dali? ;)

[kublakhan27]

Haha I think I'm okay for collabs Mrs.R ;)